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Analysis of the Haiku structure

métro de nuit –
une touffe de cheveux crépus
vibre sur le sol


Valérie Rivoallon, France
cco 2017-01-2

Commentaire.

La force de ce haïku réside dans l'étrangeté de la situation. Ce qui résiste à une explication simple pose un problème lors du rangement en mémoir et donne de la force à l'objet.

Keywords

metro night urban

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* yugen - Yugen.
Yugen is a concept of Japanese aesthetics that can be expressed as deep, mysterious, dark, troubled.... In criticism of Japanese poetry, he expresses a subtle depth of things that are vaguely evoked in the poem.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* absence - Yugen.
Yugen is a concept of Japanese aesthetics that can be expressed as deep, mysterious, dark, troubled.... In criticism of Japanese poetry, he expresses a subtle depth of things that are vaguely evoked in the poem.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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