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Analysis of the Haiku structure

family photo
the blur of
the dog's tail

photo de famille
le flou de
la queue du chien


Julie Warther, USA
cco 2017-02-1

Commentaire.

Ellipse complète, juste le détail amusant pour expliquer le chien qui gambade dans la famille. On imagine tout le reste.

Keywords

family dog photo humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

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