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Analysis of the Haiku structure

morphine drip
my father asks me
for more time

goutte-à-goutte demorphine
mon père me demande
pour plus de temps


Roberta Beary, Ireland
cco 2017-02-1

Commentaire.

Haïku dominé par l'archetype du Temps qui passe. L'auteure ne dit pas explicitement et un flou naît du sens de L3. Ou plutôt, on hésite à comprendre. La retenue, l'ellipse font la force de ce haïku qui exprime avec pudeur, uns situation grave.

Keywords

death illness

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)


* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

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