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Analysis of the Haiku structure

marée haute...
elle retient
un sanglot


Coralie Berhault Creuzet , France
cco 2017-02-1

Commentaire.

Voici un haïku dont la force provient de l'importance de l'ellipse et du choix, de la justesse de l'élément d'atmosphère. L1 a plusieurs sens. C'est de plus une image forte, dans tous ses sens. Le peu d'informations disponibles laisse toute la liberté à l'auteur d'imagine la situation. C'est en effet nécessaire pour la ranger en mémoire. On ne peut ranger facilement en mémoire long-terme (après la minute) qu'un objet compris. C'est très important de comprendre cela pour écrire correctement de haïkus actifs.

Keywords

sadness woman tide

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* feuilleté - Multilevel discourse, layered haiku.
Haikus with two (or more) reading levels. A first objective level referring to a situation, another underlying level saying something else. The Chinese are fond of this type of discourse with many levels.

These various levels may be conscious or unconscious.

We find a little bit of this technique consciously applied in the weather haiku. The weather element can be understood as an mention to the weather and as the element that creates the atmosphere of haiku.

The two levels of discourse are conscious and disjointed and well visible in haiku tanka, of which they form the two parts. However, they overlap in the layered haiku.

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* courtmetrage - Short clip.
A haiku that could be a video clip. The initial sequence of a short film.

* yugen - Yugen.
Yugen is a concept of Japanese aesthetics that can be expressed as deep, mysterious, dark, troubled.... In criticism of Japanese poetry, he expresses a subtle depth of things that are vaguely evoked in the poem.

* - Yugen.
Yugen is a concept of Japanese aesthetics that can be expressed as deep, mysterious, dark, troubled.... In criticism of Japanese poetry, he expresses a subtle depth of things that are vaguely evoked in the poem.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_ChoseCachee - The hidden Thing.

Quelque chose de non visible a une activité qui se révèle de diverses manières. Il ne s'agit pas d'une Chose Enfouie, notion en relation avec l'Inconscient, mais simplement non visible.

* T_PassePresent - Bubble of Past.

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