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Analysis of the Haiku structure

fardés poudrés
les abricots racolent
dans le verger


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-05-2

Commentaire.

Pas vraiment un haïku en sens strict mais j'ai bien aimé le style moqueur. Et puis, à part la césure, il a tout : le mot de saison, l'ouverture, le regard amusé, la surprise, le double sens, l'appel aux sens (goût, texture, odeurs...).

Keywords

scent fruit humour orchard

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

Effects: liasen - Binding with sensorial feelings.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-suj - Subject, content


* perso - Personification.
Personification. Projection of human feelings or behaviours on things or animals.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-vecu - Personal(Experienced, psycho, acquired...)


* poesie - Use of poetical devices.
Use of poetical devices.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-trait - Style,subject handling


* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

Effects: decod - Decoding the structure.
Affects the time required to understand the speech by the time required to decode the structure. Groups the elements by physical and temporal caesuras.

At the level: 0-form - Formal level
Formal appearance, written forms.

Description level: 1-pres - Formal representation

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