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fardés poudrés
les abricots racolent
dans le verger


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-05-2

Commentaire.

Pas vraiment un haïku en sens strict mais j'ai bien aimé le style moqueur. Et puis, à part la césure, il a tout : le mot de saison, l'ouverture, le regard amusé, la surprise, le double sens, l'appel aux sens (goût, texture, odeurs...).

Keywords

scent fruit humour orchard

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* perso - Personification.
Personification. Projection of human feelings or behaviours on things or animals.

* poesie - Use of poetical devices.
Use of poetical devices.

* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

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