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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Branche cassée.
Fleurs dans un autre endroit.
Maintenant.


Meryem Lahlou, Maroc
cco 2017-05-2

Commentaire.

Composition en trois segments mais qui n'est pas une juxtaposition. J'aime bien L3 qui introduit la notion d'une séquence dans le temps. Celle-ci est cependant composée d'une partie descriptive et d'une fin temporelle. Cette structure hybride est assez rare. Il faut remarquer que la découpe en trois segments ponctués à la fin crée de l'espace temporel qui ajoute à la rareté de cette structure.

Keywords

tree flower

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* zoom - Zoom of the discourse.
The three segments of haiku are organized with images that are closer and closer as a zoom effect.

* S3 - Three elements haiku.
Three independent elements compose the haiku. Also known as the grocery list.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

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