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Analysis of the Haiku structure

graduates
hurry across the stage
dandelion seeds


Sharon Rhutaseljones, Africa
cco 2017-05-2

Commentaire.

Image classique, la similitude entre un groupe de jeunes, qu'ils soient enfants ou animaux, et des graines se dispersant au vent. A remarquer que la similitude est ici localisée dans le temps, celui de la fin de l'année scolaire et de la montée en graines des fleurs. Ce qui en fait le mot de saison.

Keywords

wind seed child school

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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