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Analysis of the Haiku structure

sleepless night -
in the distance
midnight express

nuit sans sommeil -
au loin
l'express de minuit


Swann Gail, India
cco 2017-05-2

Commentaire.

Schéma fréquent de haïku qui est mu par les archétypes majeurs de la Nuit, du Voyage avec l'inquiétude d'une nuit sans sommeil. Le train qui traverse la nuit semble être lié à quelque chose d'important en nous. Opposition entre Ici versus le lointain, entre Intérieur et Extérieur, entre rester et partir.

Keywords

insomnia train sound night

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm087 -

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Nuit - The Night.

La nuit primale, avec son obscurité, ses "dangers", ses mystères et nos peurs millénaires.

* A_Voyage - The Travel.

Le voyage, la migration... Lié à la Route qui elle est plus en potentialités que le Voyage qui est action.

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

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