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memorial day
another mattress sale
at the strip mall

memorial day
une autre vente de matelas
sur le mall


Sondra Byrnes, USA
cco 2017-05-2

Commentaire.

J'ai bien aimé la dureté de la juxtaposition entre les deux images. La guerre (dure) et le commerce des matelas (mous). L'oubli des sacrifiés transparait dans ce haïku. Ce jour sacré est pollué par des considérations mercantiles.

Keywords

urban

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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