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Analysis of the Haiku structure

elle chante sur les galets
la bouteille de bière
où s’engouffre le vent


Louis Nagara, France
cco 2017-05-2

Commentaire.

Dislocation. Le sujet de L1 est défini en L2. Technique qui permet de créer de l'espace par la césure.

Keywords

humour bottle wind sound beer

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* dislocation - Dislocation.
Dislocation: repetition of the subject at the end (or at the beginning) of the sentence. The repeated subject is then specified. This delays understanding and insists on the main subject of the speech.

ex: He loses his leaves, the tree.

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