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من صيف مضى
‏جيوبي ملأى
‏برمل الشاطئ

De l'été.
‏Mes poches sont pleines.
‏Le sable de la plage.


Meryem Lahlou, Maroc
cco 2017-07-2

Commentaire.

Le sable est souvent un élément de rappel d'une situation passée. Le motif du souvenir dans la poche est aussi fréquent.

Keywords

beach sand pocket

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm089 -

Used techniques :

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

* mémoire - Memory active element.
The driving force behind this type of haiku seems to be a memory that reappears.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Indice - The clue, the sign, the revealing detail.

Quelque chose, un détail, nous révèle une chose cachée ou invisible.

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