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Analysis of the Haiku structure

amandes amères~
la plus joyeuse de écaleuses d'amandes
n'a plus de nez


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-07-2

Commentaire.

Brutalité du sujet. La dame a été victime de violence conjugale. L1 tient ici la place de la meteo dans un haïku meteo. Elle annonce le climat du discours. A noter l'opposition entre rire et gravité qui donne la force de ce haïku.

Keywords

violence woman

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* dur - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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