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Analysis of the Haiku structure

nouvelle vague -
tonnerre de gros galets
suivis d'écume


Pascale Senk, France
cco 2017-07-2

Commentaire.

J'ai bien aimé ce haïku car il est un parfait exemple de discours feuilleté. En discours de surface, la mer. En discours profond, en partie inconscient au départ, une opinion amusée sur le renouvellement des générations. Une illustration que nous pouvons écrire quelque chose avec en arrière-pensée, autre chose. Super.

Keywords

sea humour sound

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* feuilleté - Multilevel discourse, layered haiku.
Haikus with two (or more) reading levels. A first objective level referring to a situation, another underlying level saying something else. The Chinese are fond of this type of discourse with many levels.

These various levels may be conscious or unconscious.

We find a little bit of this technique consciously applied in the weather haiku. The weather element can be understood as an mention to the weather and as the element that creates the atmosphere of haiku.

The two levels of discourse are conscious and disjointed and well visible in haiku tanka, of which they form the two parts. However, they overlap in the layered haiku.

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