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Analysis of the Haiku structure

je tonds la pelouse~
l'ombre du palmier a déjà
franchi la clôture

Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-08-1


Un autre haïku avec le schéma de l'ombre active. Elle n'est en fait pas active réellement mais quand même. Il faut remarquer l'efficacité du discours qui montre le temps qui passe au travers d'un détail, d'une constatation. L'auteure a, à un moment de son travail, remarqué que quelque chose avait changé. Subrepticement. Il y a aussi comme un peu d'inquiétude avec cette ombre qui passe la clôture.


shadow garden

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* perso - Personification.
Personification. Projection of human feelings or behaviours on things or animals.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Ombre - The Shadow plays an active part.

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