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Analysis of the Haiku structure

vite dissipée
la fraîcheur de l’aube –
thé fumant


Michel Duflo, France
cco 2017-08-2

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur l'opposition. Le motif est fréquent mais avec du café au lieu du thé. Cet écart lui donne tout son intérêt. Il y a cependant une possible connotation de fraîcheur de menthe (similitude) dans les sèmes liés au thé. A noter la disposition spéciale avec l'élément d'atmosphère (ici meteo) localisé au centre.

Keywords

tea morning dawn

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

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