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Analysis of the Haiku structure

midi d'août~
le soleil mijote au fond
de la cocotte


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-08-2

Commentaire.

Schéma assez répandu que celui d'un astre dans un récipient. Au delà des oppositions Haut versus Bas, Grand versus Petit, on peut remarquer la simulitude basée sur le sème de chaleur.

Keywords

sun warmth cooking

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm066 -

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_HautBas - Up <> Down.

Une opposition entre ce qui est en Haut et ce qui est en Bas. Par exemple, le ciel et la terre, les étoiles et les lumières de la ville, les nuages et la mer...

* D_GrandPetit - Big <> Little.

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