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Analysis of the Haiku structure

la jeune piqueuse
couchée sur sa machine connait-elle
Zalando!


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-08-2

Commentaire.

Ce n'est à proprement pas un haïku. Cependant, dans notre monde urbain, L3 joue le rôle de mot de saison. Il donne le contexte, porte les connotations de la mondialisation et est largement partagé. Il sert de toile de fond au discours.

Keywords

social

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

Effects: decod - Decoding the structure.
Affects the time required to understand the speech by the time required to decode the structure. Groups the elements by physical and temporal caesuras.

At the level: 0-form - Formal level
Formal appearance, written forms.

Description level: 1-pres - Formal representation


* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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