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yoga sous mon arbre
a chaque inspiration
l'odeur de l'écorce


Pascale Senk, France
cco 2017-09-1

Commentaire.

Il y a quelque chose de profond dans ce haïku. Il crée un lien entre l'intérieur et le Monde au travers du Souffle. Le Monde étant manifesté par l'Arbre, celui qui supporte le Ciel (Yggdrasil) et qui plonge ses racines dans les Profondeurs... On peut aussi noter une opposition entre l'immatériel (souffle) et le dur de l'écorce. (Note: Je mets les mots-concepts) en Majuscules).

Keywords

silence scent tree

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm079 -

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* union - Union between author and subject.
A link, union, between the author and a being, animal or thing. Empathy.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Arbre - The Tree of the World.

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

* D_MoiMonde - I versus the World

Mention d'un être qui se dstincte par rapport au reste du Monde.

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