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Partout en France
sans aucun accord de branche
la saison des pommes


Anne Cottereau, France
cco 2017-09-1

Commentaire.

Il est difficile de faire du haïku de protestation car le message précède le discours. Et comme on veut bien dire, on le fait mal. Mais ici, l'auteure a réussi le tour de force en se basant sur l'humour et le double sens des mots. Il faut remarquer l'habile rôle de pivot de la branche qui transforme le message en contexte de saison.

Keywords

social protest humour apple

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* pivot - Pivotal element.
Use of a pivot element as a link between two different parts of the haiku. This element belongs to both parts.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

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