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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Rentrée des classes -
sur le chemin de l'école
l'étal du boucher


Ben Coudert, France
cco 2017-09-1

Commentaire.

Une vision brutale qui illustre bien ce qu'est une rentrée de classe pour certains. J'aime bien cette juxtaposition efficace qui évite un long discours au moyen d'une image forte. A remarquer que le haïku n'acquiert sa force qu'à l'extrême fin.

Keywords

school humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* dur - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

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