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Dans le car Macron
des manifestants rennais
matin d’automne


Anne Cottereau, France
cco 2017-09-2

Commentaire.

Haïku social, difficile d'utilisation car il est limité à la France.Il est trop localisé pour être compris partout Il note cependant avec férocité le désarroi des travailleurs en grève contre la Loi Travail. . L'automne, avec ses connotations de chute, de froidure, contribue à créer une atmosphère de la fin d'un monde...

Keywords

protest social humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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