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Analysis of the Haiku structure

the weight
of the muddy river
jerry-can on her head

le poids
de la rivière boueuse
jerry-can sur sa tête


Marilyn Fleming, USA
cco 2017-10-1

Commentaire.

Efficace ! Ici, l'image précède le message. Un haïku de protestation réussi.

Keywords

protest

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

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