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Analysis of the Haiku structure

cherry blossom rain
laughter
chasing laughter

pluie de fleurs de cerisiers
un rire
chasse l'autre


Liu Chen-ou, Canada
cco 2017-10-1

Commentaire.

Similitude entre les pétales des fleurs et le rire de l'enfant.

Keywords

flower cherry tree laughter child

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Fragilité - Fragility, tenuousness.

Quelque chose de fragile dans un univers "hostile". Qui emporte en lui quelque chose.

David, le petit être.

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