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un pamplemousse rose
pour chasser le blues~
lune de l'aube


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-11-1

Commentaire.

Sarra écrit bien les haïkus meteo-cuisine. Celui-ci est spécial car il ne note pas une opposition entre Chaud à l'intérieur et Froid à l'extérieur, mais fonctionne différemment. L'acidité du fruit est en opposition, en antidote, à la morosité du matin. Techniquement, on voit l'opposition de couleur (au travers du double sens de blues) et une similitude de rondeur entre le fruit et la lune.

Keywords

fruit pink morning moon dawn taste

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm054 -

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* opp-sim - Opposition-similarity.
Opposition AND similarity. A relationship between two terms is both an opposition and a similarity.

For example: an egg on the plate and the setting sun. There is a sharing of the semes of roundness, red, but opposition between Up versus Bottom, Large versus Small.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

* D_HautBas - Up <> Down.

Une opposition entre ce qui est en Haut et ce qui est en Bas. Par exemple, le ciel et la terre, les étoiles et les lumières de la ville, les nuages et la mer...

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