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Analysis of the Haiku structure

matin gris
mais cet oeuf
dans la poêle


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-11-2

Commentaire.

Similitude entre l'oeuf et le soleil absent. Opposition entre l'oeuf coloré et le gris du matin. Une opposition-similitude entre trois termes deux à deux. Rare.

Keywords

egg morning humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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