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Analysis of the Haiku structure

tornando a casa
le stesse nuvole
di ieri

way back home
the same clouds
as yesterday

chemin du retour
les mêmes nuages
que hier

Eufemia, Lombardia Griffo, Italia
cco 2017-12-1


Haïku marqué par le Temps cyclique. Un type de temps particulier qui matérialise les cycles du jour, des semaines, des saisons, des années. Malgré sa boucle fermée, il dit aussi le temps qui coule car les choses ne sont pas exactement comme avant après la boucle.


cloud way_home

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.

At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious

At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)

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