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Analysis of the Haiku structure

matin du nouvel an~
sur ses lèvres
le rouge de la veille


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2018-01-1

Commentaire.

Un haïku de passage de borne. Le rouge est lié à la fête, il apporte une connotation sensuelle.

Keywords

morning New_Year red color

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm091 -

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* soudain - Sudden modification.
The haiku describes a sudden, sometimes unexpected event. He grabs something that just happened. It appears as a transition between two states: before and after.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Passage - The Crossing, the Transition.

Tout ce qui est le passage d'une étape, d'une borne, d'un état à l'autre. Le franchissement d'un col, le passage d'une barrière séparant deux zones. Les ponts, solstices, nouvel-an...

* T_PassePresent - Bubble of Past.

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