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Analysis of the Haiku structure

janvier
sur l’arbre foudroyé
le bruit de la pluie


Marlène Alexa, Egypte
cco 2018-01-2

Commentaire.

La juxtaposition L2 L3 crée un sentiment curieux, comme s'il existait un lien enfoui entre les deux images. L'auteure veut dire quelque chose mais laisse la juxtaposition le faire à sa place. Une belle configuration et économie de moyens. A remarquer, la diminution d'intensité des phénomènes météos de L2 à L3 qui pourrait matérialiser le cours du Temps. Janvier est le début d'un cycle, l'arbre mort, lui est au bout du sien.

Keywords

rain sound tree death thunderstorm

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

* T_Lent - Slow Time.

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