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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Lingerie fine -
le parfum des roses
après la pluie


Sandrine Waronski, France
cco 2018-01-2

Commentaire.

Haïku tout en subtilités. Il utilise plusieurs sens qu'il met en résonnance par la juxtaposition des images. Les liaisons ne sont pas évidentes. Elles nous laissent donc imaginer les choses. Un haïku riche, donc.

Keywords

erotic scent perfume rain roses flower lingerie

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* trans_S - Transition in the surface discourse.
Surface transition.

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