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Analysis of the Haiku structure

soirée de brume-
une note solitaire
s'échappe d'un saxo


Francine Aubry, France
cco 2018-01-2

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur une opposition trans-senorielle entre le gris monotone, silencieux de la nuit et la coloration riche de sonorités du saxo. La note solitaire apparaît comme un Point actif ou sur le plan archétypal comme une manifestation de La Vie. Elle est aussi le pendant sonore de la Lumière dans la Nuit.

Keywords

evening haze music sound

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm084 -

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* atmosphere - Atmosphere.
Something emerges from all the elements that constitute haiku: a climate, an atmosphere. The author does not state this explicitly. It is the reader who reconstructs it from his or her own experience.

This is especially true in three-segment haiku, also called "grocery list". But this effect can also be achieved in other ways.

The mention of feelings related to the weather and taste adds a multisensory dimension to the atmosphere created.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_PointActif - Active point (color, sound, ...)

Variante de la Couleur. Ici, c'est un point, généralement de couleur qui a le rôle important. En fait, cet archétype illustre le fait que c'est l'Inconscient qui analyse les images de notre regard. C'est lui qui repère ces points et y dirige notre regard.

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

* D_ChaudFroid - Warm <> Cold.

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