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Analysis of the Haiku structure

entre deux averses
la bouteille de saint-julien
commence sa décrue


Michel Duflo, France
cco 2018-01-2

Commentaire.

J’aime bien ces haïkus comiques. Il ne faut jamais oublier que le comique de situation est un élément important du genre. A noter, l’absence de majuscule au nom, une pratique qui tend à rendre minimaliste l’écriture en estompant toute mise en évidence pour en revenir au texte brut.

Keywords

rain wine alcool humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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