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Analysis of the Haiku structure

touffeur~
pour faire mûrir les grenades
dit-il


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2018-02-1

Commentaire.

Une structure rare de discours rapporté, ici, mis en juxtaposition de trois éléments.

Keywords

warmth fruit

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* S3 - Three elements haiku.
Three independent elements compose the haiku. Also known as the grocery list.

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

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