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Analysis of the Haiku structure

dans le jardin oublié
elle sème ses pétales
l'aubépine

in the forgotten garden
spreading its petals
hawthorn


Zoe Weatherwax,
cco 2018-05-1

Commentaire.

Haïku construit sur le schéma de la Vie qui triomphe. Un élément, généralement un végétal, parfois une couleur continue à perpétuer la vie d'un lieu à l'abandon. Il résiste à la Déchéance. Ce schéma est fréquent, il semble attirer l'attention de l'auteur et correspondre par là à une espèce de réaction contre le malheur.

Keywords

garden flower

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm017 -

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm070 -

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* dislocation - Dislocation.
Dislocation: repetition of the subject at the end (or at the beginning) of the sentence. The repeated subject is then specified. This delays understanding and insists on the main subject of the speech.

ex: He loses his leaves, the tree.

* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

* T_Lent - Slow Time.

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