Analysis of the Haiku structure
يخبئان قبلة خاطفة
خلف قبلة أطول
un petit baiser
derrière un baiser plus long
Latifa Oudouhou, Maroc
Haïku basé sur une ellipse. L'auteure ne dit pas grand chose mais on comprend la scène.
garden love couple kiss
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* ellipse - Ellipsis.
Ellipsis: Only the minimum is said but the whole situation can be reconstruct by the reader.
This is also the case when only a part of the discourse is present. The remaining part can be guessed by the reader.
* zoom - Zoom of the discourse.
The three segments of haiku are organized with images that are closer and closer as a zoom effect.
* yugen - Yugen.
Yugen is a concept of Japanese aesthetics that can be expressed as deep, mysterious, dark, troubled.... In criticism of Japanese poetry, he expresses a subtle depth of things that are vaguely evoked in the poem.
* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.
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