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Analysis of the Haiku structure

bare hill—
broken glass sparkling
where the sun moves

colline nue—
du verre brisé étincelle
où le soleil se déplace


Nicholas David Klacsanzky , Ukraine
cco 2018-07-2

Commentaire.

Un beau haïku de Lumière, avec une fascinante opposition-similitude basée sur la pensée que la lumière du soleil qui bouge reste un peu dans un éclat de verre (brisé). Ce verre contient donc un peu du soleil qui va se coucher. Un éclat du Monde, juste un instant. Haïku du soudain, de la mince tranche de temps. Un peu comme une Rencontre. Magique.

Keywords

sunset glass light

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* détail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* opp-sim - Opposition-similarity.
Opposition AND similarity. A relationship between two terms is both an opposition and a similarity.

For example: an egg on the plate and the setting sun. There is a sharing of the semes of roundness, red, but opposition between Up versus Bottom, Large versus Small.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Lumière - The Light.

La Lumière.
A mettre en relation avec la Lumière dans la Nuit.

* A_PointActif - Active point (color, sound, ...)

Variante de la Couleur. Ici, c'est un point, généralement de couleur qui a le rôle important. En fait, cet archétype illustre le fait que c'est l'Inconscient qui analyse les images de notre regard. C'est lui qui repère ces points et y dirige notre regard.

* T_immobile - Frozen Time.

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