Analysis of the Haiku structure
cool against her skin
choosing a coffin
frais contre sa peau
choisissant un cercueil)
John Hawkhead, UK
Percutant par sa chute. Une opposition brutale entre la Vie en L1-L2 et la Mort en L3. Efficace.
death skin woman
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.
* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny
* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.
Archetypes and dialectics
* A_Mort - Death.
Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).
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