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Analysis of the Haiku structure

potager du matin~
croquer les concombres
sans les laver


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2018-08-1

Commentaire.

Haïku sensuel, sensoriel. On sent l'odeur du concombre, le craquement sous la dent. Ces impressions entrent en résonnance avec la fraîcheur du matin. Juste poser les images et laisser agir. Efficace.

Keywords

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Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

Effects: liasen - Binding with sensorial feelings.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-suj - Subject, content


* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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