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Analysis of the Haiku structure

bruine d'automne
acidulée et fraiche
la pomme verte


Marlène Alexa, Egypte
cco 2018-08-1

Commentaire.

Haïku multi-sensoriel. La résonance entre la pomme et la bruine basée sur le sème de fraîcheur, et celle entre le caractère acide et la mention de la verdeur de la pomme donnent de l'activité à ce haïku. A noter la construction dans laquelle les termes opposés sont situés aux extrêmités (L1 - L3).

Keywords

drizzle apple color green autumn

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

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