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Analysis of the Haiku structure

one finger
raised in greeting
heat wave

un doigt
levé comme bonjour
vague de chaleur


Annette Makino, USA
cco 2018-08-1

Commentaire.

J'aime bien cette juxtaposition d'éléments qui donnent la force à ce haïku. L'auteure n'explique pas mais laisse au lecteur toute sa liberté. A noter la similitude entre les éléments basée sur un petit groupe de sèmes (le caractère explosif de la situation).

Keywords

heat violence

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

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