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Analysis of the Haiku structure

يا له من حظ
ولا قملةً أصاب القرد
من جسده

Quelle chance !
Pas de poux.
De son corps.


Hamid Wahibi, Maroc
cco 2018-09-1

Commentaire.

Une merveille de discours elliptique. L'auteur a posé juste le minimum d'éléments pour laisser au lecteur le maximum d'imagination.

Keywords

humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

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