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Analysis of the Haiku structure

l'orage s'éloigne -
d'une fenêtre ouverte
un prélude de Bach


Damien Gabriels, France
cco 2018-10-1

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur les oppositions Interieur versus Extérieur, Grand versus Petit, Sauvage versus Humain. A remarquer la construction mimant la situation avec en L2 la Fenêtre qui sépare les deux mondes. Haïku magique !

Keywords

thunderstorm music window

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* yugen - Yugen.
Yugen is a concept of Japanese aesthetics that can be expressed as deep, mysterious, dark, troubled.... In criticism of Japanese poetry, he expresses a subtle depth of things that are vaguely evoked in the poem.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Fenetre - A Window to another world.

Il s'agit d'une ouverture par laquelle on voit autre chose. Une fenêtre qui permet de voir un autre monde. Un miroir qui montre le monde.

A mettre en liaison avec l'archetype des mondes parallèles.

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

* D_sauvage - Domesticated <> Wild.

* D_Grand_Petit - Domesticated <> Wild.

* T_Transition - Transition in Time between two states.

- Le moment où la situation passe d'un état à un autre ou va le faire.
- C'est aussi le moment "juste avant". (A vérifier car il faut le différencier du T_FuturPresent) Ici, c'est un futur certain et immédiat (comme en chinois).

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