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Analysis of the Haiku structure

birth certificate—
water damage
on my name

certificat de naissance—
abimé par l'eau
sur mon nom


Nicholas David Klacsanzky , Ukraine
cco 2018-11-2

Commentaire.

Jeu de mots sur la perte des eaux et le certificat abimé par l'eau.

Keywords

humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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