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ليلة ممطرة-
لا شيء أكثر جمالا
من هذه البرتقالة !

Nuit pluvieuse
rien n'est plus beau que cette orange !


Abelhak Moutachaoui Abdou, Maroc
cco 2018-12-1

Commentaire.

Un cas particulier du schéma météo froide versus nourriture chaude. Ici, ce n'est pas la chaleur d'une nourriture mais les sèmes de la couleur vive et en relation avec l'été (chaud) qui sont opposés au froid et à l'obscurité. A bien observer.

Keywords

night rain fruit orange

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm016 -

Used techniques :

* interj - Interjection.
Interjection.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_PointActif - Active point (color, sound, ...)

Variante de la Couleur. Ici, c'est un point, généralement de couleur qui a le rôle important. En fait, cet archétype illustre le fait que c'est l'Inconscient qui analyse les images de notre regard. C'est lui qui repère ces points et y dirige notre regard.

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

* D_ClairSombre - Light <> Darkness.

* D_ChaudFroid - Warm <> Cold.

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