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Analysis of the Haiku structure

une poignée
de lentilles sur la salade-
Géminides


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2018-12-1

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur la juxtaposition. Deux éléments sans rapports immédiats sont mis en confrontation et de là naît l'effet. A la relecture, la poignée de lentilles et les étoiles filantes (Geminides) ont en commun, les sèmes de petits éléments jetés. Mais cela n'apparaît qu'à la relecture, car le lecteur, ne voyant pas de relations en première lecture, refait instinctivement une analyse afin de comprendre le discours. Ce travail automatique, nécessaire au liage en mémoire, ajoute de la force au haiku.

Keywords

food star

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opp-sim - Opposition-similarity.
Opposition AND similarity. A relationship between two terms is both an opposition and a similarity.

For example: an egg on the plate and the setting sun. There is a sharing of the semes of roundness, red, but opposition between Up versus Bottom, Large versus Small.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_PoinActif -

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

* D_HautBas - Up <> Down.

Une opposition entre ce qui est en Haut et ce qui est en Bas. Par exemple, le ciel et la terre, les étoiles et les lumières de la ville, les nuages et la mer...

* T_Immobile - Frozen Time.

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