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Analysis of the Haiku structure

hiver -
J'attends la neige avec une carotte à la main


Meryem Lahlou, Maroc
cco 2018-12-1

Commentaire.

Haïku humoristique. On voit bien la situation, dans l'attente de pouvoir faire un bonhomme de neige. Il ne faut jamais oublier l'importance de l'humour dans le haïku. A remarquer qu'il ne faut pas prendre le discours au premier niveau de lecture. Il ne s'agit pas d'une situation perçue mais plutôt projetée en imagination. Une technique à observer et à tester.

Keywords

snow snowman humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* glissement - Shifting from one meaning to another.
Shift of discourse from one meaning to another. It's the whole discourse that changes meaning. Not to be confused with the surprise, which is an unexpected element that does not deeply change the meaning of the discourse.

* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

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