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صف أزرار فستانك -
ترسانة عسكرية
بكامل عتادها

Le rang des boutons de ta robe
un arsenal militaire
avec tout son matériel


Meryem Lahlou, Maroc
cco 2019-01-1

Commentaire.

J'ai bien aimé ce senryu par l'ellipse de son discours. Il m'a aussi fait penser à la chanson "Jolie Môme" (barrière de frou-frou).

Keywords

humour woman clothes robe erotic

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* poesie - Use of poetical devices.
Use of poetical devices.

* ellipse - Ellipsis.
Ellipsis: Only the minimum is said but the whole situation can be reconstruct by the reader.
This is also the case when only a part of the discourse is present. The remaining part can be guessed by the reader.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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