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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Les pierres des tombes,
J'aurais voulu répondre.
Enchanté de faire votre connaissance


Latifa Oudouhou, Maroc
cco 2019-01-2

Commentaire.

On dirait un haïku japonais ancien par sa manière de parler de la mort. Un détachement, un peu d'ironie, une opposition du Moi versus la Mort. J'ai bien aimé L3, dont il est difficile de cerner exactement les sens tant ils me semblent nombreux.

Keywords

cemetery humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* lectures - Multiple readings. Several possible meanings.
Haiku has several possible meanings but always at the surface level. It is not a question of a layered discourse where the meaning of surface and deep differs. Not to be confused with layered discourse with a surface discourse and one or more deep discourses.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

* D_VieMort - Life <> Death.

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