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Analysis of the Haiku structure

pluie continue-
la sonate en mi majeur
adoucit les gouttes


Pascale Senk, France
cco 2019-02-1

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur le motif d’une opposition entre une musique à l’Intérieur versus une météo peu agréable (Extérieur). Cette opposition se conjugue avec une similitude liée aux sonorités. Elle joue sur le contexte pour créer une atmosphère. Une pluie faible aurait demandé un mi mineur.

Keywords

rain music

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm084 -

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* similitude - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

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