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envie de chocolat
au lever
la beauté de l'horizon


Caroline Coppé, Belgique
cco 2019-02-1

Commentaire.

J’aime bien ce senryu basé sur une juxtaposition d’éléments sans relations. Discours minimaliste, il crée cependant une atmosphère que chaque lecteur reconstruira avec son vécu. J’y trouve aussi un glissement de sens entre le début et la fin du discours. Une technique qui ajoute de l’espace lors de la phase de liage en mémoire. C’est une peu comme on avait mis deux discours l’un après l’autre. L’un continuant l’autre, sur une autre plan. A étudier.

Keywords

chocolate morning sky horizon

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm079 -

Used techniques :

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* atmoshere - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Ciel - The Sky.

Le Ciel. L'immensité de ce qui est au-dessus de nous. Sans connotation religieuse.

Souvent lié aux dialectiques D_HautBas et D_GrandPetit.

* A_Espace - The Space.

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

* D_MoiMonde - I versus the World

Mention d'un être qui se dstincte par rapport au reste du Monde.

* T_Immobile - Frozen Time.

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