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Analysis of the Haiku structure

fish market
mackerels gaze
to the heavens

marché aux poissons
les maquereaux regardent
vers les cieux


Bryan Rickert, USA
cco 2019-02-2

Commentaire.

Tout le désespoir (supposé) du monde dans ce regard des poissons vers le Ciel. En fait, ce devrait être vers l'eau. L'image est ici anthropomorphe et donc, nous parle plus. Il faut remarquer que l'on a ici un discours superficiel (poissons mourants) et un discours profond (le désespoir). Un bel exemple pour comprendre ce mécanisme.

Keywords

fish death sky market

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

* concordance - Accordance between the surface and deep discourses
Accordance between superfical and deep discourses. Two parallel discourses.

* - Accordance between the surface and deep discourses
Accordance between superfical and deep discourses. Two parallel discourses.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

* D_VieMort - Life <> Death.

* T_Lent - Slow Time.

* T_FuturPresent - Bubble of Future.

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